Kasukerii Birthday Illustration

This is way too cute from head to toe. I do like it but i do see many things that could be improved on.

lets start with the colors, sadly they're rather fla, especially her skin, its like one tone only, when really skin has more than one.

Proportions wise she is good, i measured about 7 1/2 heads tall, which is a normal adult height although I will point out that her feet are pretty big (not that I'm complaining XD) a normal foot is about the size or a lil smaller than the head is tall, just a little advice to add in there. and speaking of the head, there is also only one other thing i'd ask for improvement is when hair goes over the eye or eyelas/eyebrow, its should be covered still, eyelashes do not go in front of hair when the hair is supposed to cover it (sorry its just a humongous pet peeve of mine i see in a lot of anime style drawings and it drives me nuts XP)

All in all its nice but sketchy, it definitely coulda used some more shades like it does on her shoulder and base of the arm, but for the most part it looks only half finished. Its still a good try to say the least, keep up the good work anyways